Sorry for the lack of work on this page. XD I’ve been quite busy with the school year that is no wrapping up, I’m keeping my grades up (Its extremely hard…. gahhh) so I can be at least in one honors class (which my mom is killing me to be in one) next year. At the moment, I have 3 A’s, and I’m determined not only to keep them, but to raise them, along with my other 89.3. Surprisingly I’ve been doing really good in math, so I’m all good :3

So, on to what this post was originally about…

I opened up a blog! This time its like my diary… more like expressing my feelings (eh… not exactly.). I’ll write my view of a problem.. and put my output? <— Sounded better in my head.

The url is http://mywretchedlife.wordpress.com/ <– You better click that URL.

Peace,

Arlette<3

ibleedinkandmusicnotes, even started her own blog, which is very inspirational. I fell in love with it, not only cause we’re close friends, but because she’s, just I don’t know, she gets you. I would really love it if you would go and check her blog. She would love it to!(;

As for our story, I haven’t put it up on my blogroll, because well there’s nothing really to see. xD We both have put up two posts of updates, that’s it. But just for everyone to stay updated, you should check it out. Of course, I’m going to use this blog to keep everyone updated. ;D

Kisses and hugs,
Her. Blue. Eyes.

P.S. If you’re wondering about the new name, it goes with my other story “Touched”. XD

I cam here to say I’m ashamed of myself. I hate this story now. I think I didn’t in much effort, and well I’m taking this story down on December 31st.. you know for New Years, haha New Resolution? Well, I just wanted to state this.. if one clicked on the 1st of January and was like.. “whoa wait no Crushed?” but I doubt it someone would…. so just make up your end, mine was that Audrey and Lucas would fall for each in the midst of everything. Audrey knows the whole story, but doesn’t dare tell anyone. There was gonna be excerpt of her in the future, married to Lucas, having toddler, and her telling the story of her and Will, and saying it was all a fairytale.

But thanks for understanding… well people who didn’t.. sorry to let you down.

~~faithway12

P.S. Touched Chapter 2 is set go up tomorrow. And there’s a little update there too.. and a little treat. x’D

Thanks!!(: If you see in the poll it has Other… Put some ideas for other stories. ;D

~~~Audrey~~~

I talked to my dad all that afternoon, reassuring him that everything will turn out great. It was after a few hours that the hospital released me. He said: “It was just lack of food and shock that triggered this, no need to worry.” Me and my dad walked out of the hospital enterance, when I realized we had no car. “Dad?” I asked. He looked at me with new eyes. “Yes?” I looked toward the parking lot. ” Where are we going?” His eyes narrowed. “To our new home.”

This so what called “Our New Home” wasn’t as far as I expected. It was maybe, a 20 minute walk? My dad led me into a very old apartment building. I bit my lip from saying anything, but my dad could easily read my expression. For he said: “Its safe. Its the only thing I could afford.” He led me up the stairsto room “106.” Daddy opened the door with a pair of keys he toke out of his jacket pocket.He gestured for me to enter. I toke a hesitant step inside, everything looked different. The room was empty, the windows with blinds that were broken, a siginal bed laid to the far right cornor. At the end of the room was a door, that led to the bathroom, I assumed. To the left of the door was the enterance tot he kitchen. I then realized my dad was studying my face. He could tell I would have a hard time to adjust. “Dad?” I asked. Dad closed the door and locked it. With his back turned to me, he said: ” I know its not much, but I promise it’ll get better.” Dad walked into the kitchen without looking back. Daddy, I’ll help you get through this, I promised.

~~~Ally~~~

I stood outside of Audrey’s house, looking at the notice that was posted on the front door. It couldn’t be…. they lost their house? She would have told me. I pondered. I toke out my cellphone and called Audrey, to find only an automated voice to answer. Frustrated, I hanged up and opened the door. I walked into the living room. It was empty, every piece of furniture that was there beared no existence no more. I quietly went up the stairs and went into Audrey’s room, nothing was there. Her clothes, shoes, hatsm and pictures sat there untouched. Remembering where everything was, I toke her suitcase and toke every article of clothing I could place in there. When the bag was full, I zipped it up. I looked once more in her closet to make sure I didn’t forget anything and I found a little white envelope on the floor. It was already opened, all the content showing. I scanned throught it. After finishing, I realized it was court papers, it was for Will.

I walked across the street, to the neighbors house. I knocked lightly, and seconds later the door opened. I smiled. “Hi, I’m Ally Carter. I worked across the street, at Mr. Reed’s house.” He nodded. “Have you seen a moving truck or anything there lately?” He put his right hand on his face, as to think. “If I’m correct I saw a Repo truck, a Brother&Brother one.” I smiled, this time showing my teeth. “Thanks sir!” He closed the door, and went on my way to find Audrey and Mr. Reed.

I looked through the phone book for “Brother&Brother Repo Company.” I quickly dialed the number, and a young lady answered the number. “Hello, I’m Pam. How can I help you?” I shifted my leg to see Audrey’s address. “Hi, I have to deliever a package to Mr. Reed, and he gave me the wrong address, there’s a notice on the door of a recent foreclosure.” I toke a breath. “Do you have any idea where he is? Like his new address?” Something tapped on the phone. “Yes, ma’am. Hold on.” I was put on hold, then after about five minutes, the music stopped. “Ok, got a pen?” I said a quick ‘Yes’ and she gave me a new address. I muttered a “thanks” and hanged up.

~~~~~Audrey~~~

I was getting ready to sleep, when I heard a quick knock on the door. My dad was in the shower, so I hopped out of bed to answer the door. I looked through the peephole and saw a familar face. I unlocked the door, “Ally? What are you doing here?” She smiled. “Long story. I went by your home and got some stuff for you.” She held up my suitcase and my eyes started to tear up. “You shouldn’t have!” I gestured for her to come in. I closed the door behind me. She didn’t care at all at the room in front of her, she walked in normally, as if she has seen this all the time. She sat on my bed. She looked at me. “Audrey, we got to talk.”

~~~Audrey~~~~

I carried him as far I as could possibly hold him. I stopped every few minutes to make sure my grasp on him was ok. He was really not that heavy, then again he was skinny but a few muscles. I looked down at his face, and saw his eyes were closed, I felt like a mother nursing her son. I picked up my pace, to where I was fsat walking.

After a hour or two of walking I could see the enterance. Sighing in relief, I started running as fast I as could with Lucas in my arms. Before I knew it I was there. Now, to the next step: Get help. This was going to be hard. I laid Lucas down, making sure the ground was clear. I looked at him, and ran toward the only shop in sight. A drug store.

I threw the door open hard. The store manager looked at me, and had a confused face. “Hey, lady, show me your I.D..” “No, Sir. I’m not here to shop! I need help!” I cried. The guy had a weird look on his face, “What happened?” He asked like he finally noticed how bad I looked. By now I stood by the cashier, my arms laying on the counter. “Sir, just call 9-1-1.” Suddenly, I felt lightheaded. I turned my head toward the door, just in time before my head hit the floor.

 ~~~Ivan~~

I toke everything from Will. It was pretty easy, knowing Mom she wouldnt know the difference from me and Will. I dropped in, and toke a bag I found in his room, and toke every article of clothing he owned. I slipped through the front door. Walked all my way to here, threw the bag behind a tree and knocked the door. The door opened after a few minutes. “Will? What are you doing here?” A voice said. I coughed. “I wanted to see you.” Ally opened the door wider, and looked me. “Will, what do you want?” I toke a step toward Ally, she seemed to frozen, and toke a hesitant step back. “I missed you.” She slapped me across the face. “What the heck!? Will leave my house right now! You WERE my best friend’s boyfriend. I’m going to tell her EVERYTHING!” And she slammed the door shut. Big Mistake, Ally.

~~~Audrey~~~

I opened my eyes  to a white room. I heard a moniter next to me. I couldn’t be… in a hospital. I gulped. Lucas! I toke the plug that was connected to my nose, and stood up. A nurse ran in. “Miss! Lay down!” She tackled me, and I tried to break free. “No! I have to see Lucas! He was shot!” I started breaking into tears. The nurse stood quiet for a few moments. I started to calm down when I realized that he was alone. I laid down. The door opened and Dad walked in. Oh Dad, it seemed like forever I haven’t seen you. I was too overwhelmed to speak and instead spoke in my head. I looked at his face for the first time. He looked worried. I mean he knows I’m ok, its something else. “Dad,what’s wrong?” He stood next to me, and held my hand. “We lost our house.”

I trembled. Shivering. As the night went on, it got colder and colder. Lucas’ breathing was getting longer, and he seemed to gasp between each one. I could see his body shivering. After a long time, I decided to give him my sweater I had on. He needed it way more than I did. He’s fighting for his life, and well I want to help him. I don’t know around what time, but I finally fell asleep.

The sun woke me up the next morning. My neck was aching, and Lucas was asleep. His breathing ragid. I looked around me, and it was light out. Everything the same as last night. I thought back to the criminal shows I use to watch on TV, and looked around for any evidence. Found nothing, but a tree stick that was covered in blood. I looked toward the tree that was closet to Lucas, to find any evidence there to. I looked closer, and found something shiny. I picked at it, but it was stuck in deep. I found a stick near by that was sharp and pointy. It finally fell out, and I picked it up. A silver bullet. It couldn’t be, I thought. I looked at Lucas and was still asleep. Last night I was pretty sure that the bullet hit him. Maybe the stranger pulled the trigger twice? Its Possible. I put it in my pocket. I sat next the tree, and waited till Lucas waked up.

After what seemed hours, Lucas seemed to realize that he was in the forest. “Audrey?” He coughed. “You there?” I sat up and scotted toward him. “Yes, I am.” My eyes scanned his bloody shirt. “Does it still hurt?” He closed his eyes, and sucked in a breath. “Yes.” That reminded me. My cell phone. I survayed the area around me. “Lucas. I’ll be right back. Promise.” He simply nodded. I stood up and started my search, for what could save both of our lives.

~~~Ally~~~

I looked at the sky as it brightened. No stars shining, and the moon hidden behind the clouds. I let out of big sigh. I pulled my hair behind my ear. I slowly made my way to the forest behind my house. I heard my feet crunching the leaves below me. Crunch, Crunch, Crunch. I realized that there were lights shining behind me, and I turned my head to see my mom entering the garage. I sighed. I turned around and headed back home.

I walked inside my house, feeling tired. So many events has had happened today. I layed in my bed, re-playing the whole day in my head. I looked at the clock right next to me, 5:00 A.M.. I closed my eyes, hoping that sleep would come to me.

~~Ivan~~

I left the scene, confident that I left every kind of evidence gone. At this point, the first victim should be rotting away. Now, to the next step. I must find a way to crush Will’s first love. Audrey. I was one phone call away to crush her life.

~~Audrey~~~

Where’s the phone??? Where’s that stinkin’ phone? Who knew a phone could be so important? I re-traced my steps from last night, and couldn’t find it.

I was walking around the place where I tripped yesterday and heard something buzzing. Could it be? I reached for it. It being under some leaves. And I saw it. My phone. I ignored the call and dialed 9-1-1. Then I heard the voice. “You are unable to make a phone call right now. Please go by the nearest store, and pay for your phone.” Darn it. I forgot yesterday was my deadline for my phone bill. I looked toward Lucas. I couldnt let him die… because of me. This was gonna be harder than I thought it would be. I went to him. Looked at his face, and saw a young kid. I shaked my head. I slowly picked him up, stopped, and made sure I could support his weight.Then I slowly went on my way.

~~~~*** Ok, I wanted to tell you readers, that I gave in and started up my blog for “Touched.” I posted the Preface for it! Hope you like it! (Its over here…) —————————> in other Blog(s)~~~~***

~~~~Will~~~~

I slowly realized that Ivan came to get his revenge. For what I did to him, I deserved it. Though, that meant leaving this world, and leaving Audrey. She was my first true love, and forever will be. She had stolen my heart, and now have it forever.

~~~Audrey~~~

My phone wasnt where I thought I had it. I started panicking. Lucas has a severe wound, which could leave him dead. I looked around and found nothing. I looked at Lucas. “Lucas, do you think you can make it to the morning?” I heard his ragid breathing, he coughed. “I think so.” Then I thought back to health class last year. I remembered Mr. Byrd talking about how to treat life-threating wounds.

“If you have no help around, find a piece of cloth. I would suggest ripping of a piece of your own clothes. Be sure thats its not dirty. Then wrap it around the wound-” Then the bell rang.

I looked at my clothes and found that the bottum piece of my top was clean enough. I ripped it slowly, I had difficulty ripping it, but it slowly ripped. Lucas was already uncousncess by the time I wrapped it around his leg. I sat by the tree next to him, and slowly fell asleep.

~~~Ivan~~~~

I knew what I had done. I didnt regret it at all. I had spent half of my life in jail for him. (~~~~***I’ll update my “About my Characters page to let you know the story.”~~~**) I toke his body in my arms, but then heard the door open. I ran to the living room. I threw his body unto the couch. Until I heard the footsteps fade and heard a door close. I looked up and saw nothing.I swiftly toke his body and left.

I went towards the woods. Running as fast as I could, yet sneaky.I let his body tumble unto the hard floor. I toke the the lighter, and gasoline I left there. I poured it carefully, not leaving any evidence. My motive was trying to make it look like a suicide. I lite the fire, and let it burn the remain of my brother.

~~~~Ally~~~~

I stood outside of my house, re-playing the events of today. So many happened in 24 hours. I toke a breath. And coughed. I could smell the burning smell of fire nearby. I ignored it. It could someone nearby doing barbecue. You never know. There could people who love having meat at 1 in the morning. All the lights in my house were off. I figured my mom was out still with her “boy-friend”. I probably have like a few more hours till my mom arrives. So I went on my adventure to find who was “barbecuing” at 1 in the morning.

I wanted wanted to give you a update. I have made up my mind. Many people have been asking me to extend to the story a little longer. I’m fine with that. So that means we have 6 more chapters left till the ending!!!

As for what I will do after “Crushed” is over, I canceled “Marked”. BUT, not to worry. I will be making a other story. (but not just Marked.) It will be called “Touched”.

As for the sneak peek, I will be writing the Proluge for it, next week when I post the Chapter 13 for Crushed.

Thanks for Reading!!!

~faithway12